Nicely written, as expected. I'm not 100% sure you should have written it, for reasons with which you begin . . . "disgusted" seems too strong/hard on yourself, at least to me, but there is a sort of deep sucking mud quality about writing about fame, maybe impossible to skim over it. Anyway, fwiw, your central point sounds quite plausible, though I'm not going to do the Cobain scholarship . . . Keep up the good work.
Nicely written, as expected. I'm not 100% sure you should have written it, for reasons with which you begin . . . "disgusted" seems too strong/hard on yourself, at least to me, but there is a sort of deep sucking mud quality about writing about fame, maybe impossible to skim over it. Anyway, fwiw, your central point sounds quite plausible, though I'm not going to do the Cobain scholarship . . . Keep up the good work.
Thank you for reading, David! 😊